Thanks for commenting. I think you’re largely correct about my criticisms. As a publisher myself, I’m well aware of how such criticisms can annoy. With regard to one of my own books, a reviewer mentioned he wished a certain topic was covered more thoroughly. When I read that I remember that my co-author and I had discussed that very issue, and had deleted a number of pages in trying to keep the book within mission.
I also appreciate your explanation of the difference between Genesis 1:6 and 1:14. I’ll have to look at it further. I’m unconvinced within a minute or so of looking at it, but it deserves more study.
It’s always nice to hear from someone with some personal contact with an author!